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Student Prompt

I won the Prompt thing so I'm done.

Trip to the Writing Center

     I went to the writing center last week and it wasn't too bad. I went in there and read my essay to him. I was looking at my wording, tense's, and point of view mostly. There we found where I used first and second person. For the most part my wording was pretty decent so I only changed that a few times. Overall he said my paper was pretty good.
     When I went there I was kind of nervous there wouldn't be someone to help me but someone showed up pretty quick. We went over what my paper was about and for what class it was for. We went over what I thought it needed work on. I read it to him and he helped me with that. Then he gave me some ideas to how i could improve my writing. My trip to the writing center was helpful in the end.    

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Soccer

     Soccer is the most popular sport in the world. It is played all over the world and is loved all over the world. People are insanely passionate about the sport for so many reasons. The main one is that it is the best sport in the world. The amount of passion, love, and respect for the game is unimaginable. Some people live for the sport and it is what they care about most. It is even referred to as the beautiful game.
    There are many leagues all over the world including England, Spain, Italy, Germany, France, and many other places around the world. This week in England the team Chelsea beat Manchester city who was first in the league tables at the beginning of the season. Now they are fourth and Chelsea is in first. Also Liverpool lost there game and are now in third. In Spain the two biggest teams played and drew 1-1 because of a last minute header.          

Literary Analysis

     We have been writing this Literary analysis for a little while now and I know some people are finished and some are not. I am one of those who are not. I have done a good bit but I'm not done yet. It is true that is due in 9 hours and I have another two pages to due and all my other homework too. But it can be done I would say. I have done my introduction and most of my body paragraphs. I am writing about how power causes corruption and how it is shown through Jack and Ralph's relationship.
     So it is later now and I just finished my Literary analysis and it wasn't too bad. Out of all of it the two hardest parts were the introduction and the conclusion. They took some thought because you have to make them work with your points and begin/end the story. I definitely think there are some things I need to work on. One of those things is most definitely grammar. I'm positive I messed up some grammar thing during it. Also another big thing is what tense it is and what to write in. Overall I think I did a decent job on it.

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